Reviews for Not so simple
Otakuami chapter 2 . 10/24/2020
This is like a Cindrella version of Vampire story lol. Prince Charming is the vampire scared of falling in love with Cindrella as Bella, and bringing her to his world of blood and darkness. A bit sexual in nature and the sister are underage to sleep with men, like pedophilia almost.
Muggle Minx chapter 2 . 8/18/2009
I don't know, I kinda feel like you should add to it, too
belisha chapter 2 . 11/18/2008
*claps furiously* jolly good job ole' chap! sorta wanted more though! gah, that bitch micheal. can i slap him?
Jevanminx chapter 2 . 10/29/2007
This is strange but enjoyable, you slowly reveal the truth about Sebastien leaving us wondering just long enough and I like that, as well as the small darkness that surround the whole story. If that makes any sense.

OoohLookACat chapter 2 . 10/10/2007
oh so sweet

and if you added more

i wouldnt be complaining


sunflowersing chapter 2 . 9/19/2007
Yay! That was a great two-shot. :-D

cherrystraw chapter 2 . 9/19/2007
I like, I like! Keep writing!
sunflowersing chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
I really like this story! I understand it is a two-shot, but it COULD be made into a longer story. Eh, writer's choice. :-) Update soon!

kiki chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
So he's either a beast or a vampire... Looking forward to the next update!