|Reviews for Shoelaces Undone|
| almostfantastic chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Aw, the perfect storybook tale. Sigh...if only romance was really that ideal.
| SOLFA.sin chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
This is incredibly cute.
| Cealex chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
that was so insanely cute. i cannot believe it. that wrapped it up PERFECTLY. dont want you to fall just yet... so sweet. XP loved your story.
| proverbial bane chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
you see i could be a diabetic and these types of sweet stories kill me. :) but just like a diabetic, i feel the urge to sneak in sweetness, and this may have been the breaking point...
this was excellent and it kept me smiling, no, it increased my smile with every advancement... :) it made me happy and it's stories like these that should be spread around the world for borderline cynics like me. good job!