Reviews for Shoelaces Undone
R0ck3rAng3l4444 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
twibbit chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Neverland.dream chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW! This is JUST too CUTE and too SWEET! :))
The cutest one-shot I've read so far! :))

yoursillygirl chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
This was so sweet! I got all mushy inside. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
xEchoxInfernox chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
that was ridiculously sweet, it made me aww inside. it really did. i love the guy, hes so cool:D
Broken Teapot chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
That was unbelievably adorable. I love how you don't give a name to your characters, it makes them more... Connectable?

That 'fall' line had me grinning for 2 minutes (absolutely no exaduration) trying not to squeal.
neonafrohead chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
i dont normally read one shots but this story is just too cute! i love it :D
Elusive Lucidity chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Awww...the ending was so nice! I liked how you fitted their whole meeting, knowing and loving in this little one-shot. brilliant! _
charmedblush chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
That was so sweet! I loved that so much.

Awwwwwwwwwww! Perfect thing to read right before sleeping :)
loonygirl22 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Wow, that was just CUTE! Loved it! Great job. :)
Lethaldoze chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Possibly one of the most beautiful short stories I've ever read!

What else can I say other than I love it! :)
ilikedaisychains chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This was completely and utterly beautiful. It brought a tear my eye and a smile to my face. I just wanted you to know that :-)
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
amazing! So so so amazing.
Annie not Annabel chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Hey! Your lovely little story has been added to A Drop of Romeo, a website that celebrates wonderful stories on FP like this one. I am a judge for the one-shot category, so here's my review:

This story had me from the summary. I love the quirky, short one-shots that tell a very unlikely story-and this was definitely one of them. It's about the character's relationship from the very start: you never learn their names, you don't meet any other characters, and the author doesn't explain the character history at all. I didn't notice this until the end though; I was so wrapped up in the magic jennycraig10 created to even care. I liked it because it was a quiet, subtle love story-it didn't involve tons of other people, and it wasn't complicated in the least: just a simple, cute, satisfying read. It's perfect for a quick pick-me-up, or if you are just looking for inspiration. Although it was a bit unrealistic, it wasn't so much so that it became unbelievable. All of their little moments were described and timed perfectly, and it was unique. Yes, it had the typical clumsy, awkward girl (but those are the best, right?), but her man was impulsive and sweet and cute. All in all, it was a true romance story, and fluffy to the extreme (not that I minded).
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