Reviews for retrospective
Ginger Mae chapter 2 . 11/25/2007
This is very good, it feels like there is a lot of emotion that went into the poem. I like the last two lines especially...they end it very well.
PrettyHateMachine66 chapter 3 . 9/23/2007
I like this poem, and I like how you mentioned Shakespeare, but not in the way that most people would talk about him. I also saw the blue raven allusion as well.
Mat chapter 3 . 9/11/2007
I like it , its good.
Exiled-Knight chapter 2 . 8/28/2007
Another great poem. I like how your style has evolved and matured, in a way, but it still holds the essence of who you are :D Woohoo
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
You haven't lost your art, I can tell you that. The fading of I want to say innocence but that isn't innocence...of fantastical notions being replaced by the real world...I know how that feels. You did a great job capturing that.
Mat chapter 2 . 8/23/2007
Of the two poems i like both equal , though the line Rock n Roll with me holds alot of nostalgia attached to it.
PrettyHateMachine66 chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
This one's in my top 5. I think it is stronger than most of your other poems.