Reviews for Crumbled Wings
Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
That was depressing and very interesting. I enjoyed it, in an angsty, not so happy, sort of way.
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
I loved the use of parenthesis you had in the poem. Good Work.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
I like the never-ending plane crash bit. And the whole poem, of course.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Life is so harsh. Why can't we just stay young and naive? Wonderful poem. I loved how you used the parentheses. Good job.