Reviews for Final Goodbye
softersin chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
"Corruption begins in the womb we're created"

that is amazing!

good job.
a-random-writer chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
That was beautiful! It's so true, as well. I love the rythym of this poem, too! Great job!

a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
This is so sad, and so good.

Where are you? It's been a while. I hope you'll start posting again, you have major talent.

~:Isabella May:~
Sa-ah chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
That is... One of the most excellent pieces of work I've read. Your words flow so beautifully, so flawlessly... Bravo. This is going on my favorites list.
The Carrot Princess chapter 1 . 4/5/2001
You've done it again. Great work, I have to admit. Another li'l something I must add to favorites.
Suicidal Carousel author chapter 1 . 4/1/2001
Truth is a weaker force than a lie

Explanation: I should have been more clear here... I meant that in the scheme of what pain can be inflicted, a lie has more strength... at times at least...
pepsigirl chapter 1 . 3/31/2001
sad *sniffs*!
unknown7 chapter 1 . 3/29/2001
Beautiful. Excellent. The words are well written-this is great poetry. To be honest, the line "truth is a weaker force than a lie" isn't very true unless if you discribed the situation more clearly. Otherwise-you're great!