|Reviews for Tell Me, She Wasn't So Bad|
| half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Two favorite lines: "Spinning high dreams on high (wobbly) thoughts" and "Nobody loves a nobody"
The wobbly in parenthesis proves that this high, this feeling of bliss or whatever it is - it's apt to fall. Tipping precariously. :) I love its implications, and love even more that you never stated it outright.
BTW, for "nobody loves, a nobody" - that comma doesn't belong.
I found a forum from last year that you created - you'll see my comment on that, too.