Reviews for Tell Me, She Wasn't So Bad
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
konnichi wa

Two favorite lines: "Spinning high dreams on high (wobbly) thoughts" and "Nobody loves a nobody"

The wobbly in parenthesis proves that this high, this feeling of bliss or whatever it is - it's apt to fall. Tipping precariously. :) I love its implications, and love even more that you never stated it outright.

BTW, for "nobody loves, a nobody" - that comma doesn't belong.

I found a forum from last year that you created - you'll see my comment on that, too.

Ha det

-Shan-