Great start. I am interested and keen to know more. It is usually a cliche that the beautiful boy sits next to the "ugly" girl and it can go several ways, good and bad. I am deliciously anticipating which way you will choose. Like this a lot so far.

Oh my word.

I remember reading this story a few years back and I fell in love with it from the beginning. You hadn't updated in forever and so I guess I don't remember getting alerted on my e-mail that you had updated it. I am so happy with this! Makes me smile and reminds me of me and my boyfriend. He's like super skinny and well, I've got some curves. lol. The way you ended it was just absolutely perfect. So sweet and wonderful. Definitely going to favorite this story. :)

panicgoodbye

People are stupid.

Okay, so she's 5'2" then. Well, she'd only be about a size 10 then. Not too big really. Just a little heavy, but girls do have a tendency to see themselves as worse off then they actually are. Too bad.

I hope this doesn't end with her becoming super skinny and gorgeous (According to the media and masses).

Her weight couldn't have broken the chair, I know kids that are 200-300 lbs and they are just fine... Though, this one time a stick thin girl sat on a chair and it snapped. It was pretty funny. But she weighed like 80 lbs.

I weigh 145 lbs, and I am in no way fat. I'm actually at a perfectly healthy weight, sure I wouldn't mind losing a bit, but most people don't. My BMI is actually really good. How much muscle does this girl have? How tall is she?

I'm 5'3". I wear a size 8 pants (Which are actually almost too big on me) and a size medium shirt. Does that sound fat at all? Nope.

Sure, 180 lbs would be overweight. Especially if the girl was really short. But 150 lbs is nothing.

It's makes me sick what some people nowadays consider "fat". If I was 120 lbs, as you say everyone else in your story is, I'd be about a size 2. :S Way too little for me. I wouldn't have much of a figure.

I'd change her weight to make it more realistic. And make her extremely lazy, as in doesn't EVER get off the couch. And make her 5'. Then she can be fat.

I came across this story and I have to say, it really made my day.

Thanks for being original and creating a story that all girls can enjoy.

Love is not based on all attraction and looks. But who you really are, underneath.

Every girl is beautiful, no matter what their hight, weight, race, hair color, anything.

The right guy is out there somewhere.

Will I favorite this story? I think so!

Thanks again. :DD

~ June

Loved it, update soon!

ahh

ITS DONE?

woah

awesome ride

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& the ending! OMG

i was totally all like "oo-nuu-bru-"

i thought it was gonna have one of those "realistic unhappy endings" that ppl sometimes do...

BUT YAY FOR LOLA!

bad decision on renee and erics part tho... :\ i mean anyone coulda seent THAT was gonna backfire

BUT

YAY

FOR

LOLA!

welldone _

beautiful

Love the story, update soon!

eek!

cant wait for the next chappie

well done :D

AWEE

cuteness

:D

erics still awesome

i feel something bad might happen soon, in regarding a few ex-friends

cant wait to read more !

AHH

stupid barbies

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i hope nothing bad happens to Lola

Eric is continiously awesome ! and Renee

keep up the AWESOME work ;D

OH AND IM NOT REALLY FAT IF UR THINKING THAT... OK I WANT OR NEED YOU TO MAKE ELLA, INGRID, AND CHELSEA REALY FAT! OK? LOL. WAIT FAT? NO. CHUBBY, YES. BABY FAT, YES! (THATS WHAT I AM) BUT U CAN MAKE 'THEM' FAT! LOL AWSOME STORY!