I agree with Lola about following trends thingy

sweet chapter :D

so he's her crush? awesome. :D

absolutely loved it!

short but wonderfull chapter..

That was really good, I liked it..

excellent chapter! i loved it. i can't wait to read more!

I like, update son! Oh and the hunger pangs thing should die.

Must peer pressure be so unkind to Eric? xD Maroon 5 rocks, but I'm not really a huge fan though.

aw, I really like this story. I really like your main character, and you don't really see big girls in romance stories. I hope she doesn't develop an eating disorder or anything. Either way, she sounds like a character most girls can relate to. I know that I feel fat and ugly most days. D:

I can't wait to see how thing between Lola and Eric turn out. Keep writing!

AWW! yay! they share common interest! being Maroon 5! -happy dance-

They would be so cute together! have i said that before? oh well! i'll say it again if so! XD

haha

keep the awsome work up! loving it XD

~RL~

You rock! yay! haha XD

i just love this story, it can be like so totally relatable! Oh god, i just sounded really preppy for a sec there! lol P

ANWAYS! i know how she feels… when i look through magazines and articles that have really thin models in them, im like "urgh! i wish i could look like that. I wish I could be that skinny!" which is sort of ironic, because I’m pretty sure most of them are anorexic to the MAX!

BUT YOU ABSODUTELDY HAVIE HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! XD

Hehe keep it up!

~RL~

Butterfinger. So it's like...a chocolate bar mixed with ice cream. So healthy! Anyway,like I've ALWAYS been saying, this story is just so relatable to me. Keep on goiin', or truckin' whatever.

dun dun dun!

i would first like to point out that i weigh like the same as lola and i'm 5'3 and i don't look fat. [then again, i have weight in other areas of my body & it's not all belly] & I know how lola feels though, there are days where i look at myself and i'm like, "UGH."

can't wait fot the next chapter.

It seems kind of random that Lola would suddenly decide not to eat. I mean that's something you think about in the back of your head that beats itself into you until you don't want to it. It's almost generic and cliche to give her an eating disorder, or to make her just stop eating. Did you think of taking a different route with it? Like get her addicted to working out, energy drinks, or diet pills or something.

It's taking the route less traveled, and you already have an interesting character, an interesting plot, and plenty of potential to do something different and awesome don't cliche-out

mj

Great chapter! My toes are cold. And my fingers. All freaking day. I don't know why I told you that, but if it explains anything I just had some ice cream.