|Reviews for What should I do ?|
| Alex Theory chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
this poem touches me, I just recently went through something like this. I like the last few lines best:
"Is is okay?
To continue my way
In a place far away
This has that ending that leaves s without an answer but lets the reader think for themselves, great work, lots of emotion.
Looking forward to the next piece. :)
| Scared Loveless chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
It is very good. So little words, so much emotion.
| Ghost Planet chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
It's really good. The questions were good and relevent, and I'm sure a lot of us can relate to it.
| ShadowedTears chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Again, beautifully written. Keep it up!
| EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
This is heartfelt and easy to relate to. This would probably help anyone who has just lost someone who meant a lot to them. Very nicely done.
| Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
Very good work. The repetition of 'me' worked surprisingly well (i find it hard to pull off when I write poetry). I liked the 'separation/unity' effect you've created using this technique... hope that makes sense! Nice profile btw. I love 'Invictus'!