Reviews for Tested: Positive
Ri chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
Very realistic and beautifully written! You use the perfect words to describe how Mardoc feels and what he's going through, and it's descriptive but not so descriptive it's to the point where it's brutal to get through. Just the right amount - more stories and books should be written just like that honestly.

I know you said you like constructive criticism but I really don't see anything to criticize at all!

Great job, well-done, I look forward to more!

~Ri
Winter Hadley chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
This is a really beautiful story. Whether it's a short or intended to be larger scaled with more chapters, I really enjoyed it. I knew what was coming, but the fear and confusion that you expressed through the character was so real and believable. I think you've done an excellent job at giving all readers a very simplistic glimpse into the life of one preparing a struggle for survival.

I hope to read more from you.

My heart broke for Madoc. And I absolutely love the visual of the dog-tags. Cheers!