Reviews for thunderstorm
Ammom chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
What I loved about this poem, was these lines, "just a flash-

quick as lightening


let it disappear;


How you compared the pain to how it'll be hidden; in a single, startling moment. Almost unseen, but still there.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
So sad! But very well written! Keep it up!

Kristie Marie
Fading Memories chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Amazing and heartbreaking. I'm glad you published something new, I really like your work!