|Reviews for thunderstorm|
| Ammom chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
What I loved about this poem, was these lines, "just a flash-
quick as lightening
let it disappear;
How you compared the pain to how it'll be hidden; in a single, startling moment. Almost unseen, but still there.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
So sad! But very well written! Keep it up!
| Fading Memories chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Amazing and heartbreaking. I'm glad you published something new, I really like your work!