Reviews for The Vineyards in Summer
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
The last two lines of this are a little unexpected. I like how they relates to the title, but it does seem so different from the rest. I think I like it. Sorta quirky. :)

"churning it slowly" stands out to me because it brings so much into the picture. It's a cool piece.

Yours, -ty.