Reviews for Why I write
Fractured Illusion chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Eh, hate to crush your spirit, but "deep and poetic" isn't really what this is. To me, this feels like a common reason I have seen many have and is also easily understandable.

What I wonder is why you couldn't add more to the essay, still? What you leave to your teacher doesn't have to be the same as what you post, after all.

It was too short to make a point, and it felt generic :/

On the bright side, you have a good handle of writing (and for example don't start the majority of your sentences with nouns...which I hate when people do that :/). Shortly: the writing is good but the substance is lacking (in my own personal opinion).

Don't be afraid to expand! Excuses are just excuses, right? When writing you should always strive for the best.

- Frac