Reviews for Fayth Required
criti-sized chapter 10 . 5/10/2008
Now that finals are over, I have time to review.

This chapter was nice, I felt it was a bit spacey, but I guess that's good considering the fact that it has to deal with Fayth and her attitude.

C.S.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 10 . 3/31/2008
I had to reread the the 9th chapter b/c i was so confused! But now i'm unconfused, nice job on this chapter!

XKristie MarieX
InvisibleLight chapter 10 . 3/29/2008
Haha! 'Then I hate my ancestors.' Great chappie (: WHEN will Fayth and Carter just shut up and kiss already? Grr, they're acting like friends. That guy needs to get out of the deadly friend zone before it's too late (quote taken and edited from 'Just Friends'). lol. update when you can

-GN Perone
sweets555 chapter 10 . 3/29/2008
cute!
criti-sized chapter 9 . 3/26/2008
Another interesting chapter. I liked the dream part, though it could've been less romantic. Don't pay attention to that it's a personal preference, lol.

Great characters as usual, though it's annoying that everybody's treating Fayth like she's delicate.

C.S.
Hoodwynk chapter 2 . 3/4/2008
All the men..you sure like your choices. Nice plot, charies, et cetera, but the dream/vision thing was something new. Inventive and original. Congrats.
Hoodwynk chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
I like the complexity of Fayth's life, though just thinking about it makes me shudder. Interesting though. Just watch that you keep her human. Superwoman is fun, but mortals do need to relax now and then. Love the guys, especially how you turned it up a bit with the lethal one.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 9 . 2/22/2008
lol wow. Love the chapter! Who cares that it took you so long to update. The wait(once again) was well worth it! This story is awsome. Think about actuly publishing it! I'm so glad Fayth is getting better! Update when you can and hopefully your headachs go away!

XKristie MarieX
InvisibleLight chapter 9 . 2/21/2008
No problemo. I have troubles with updating all the time. (: I love the chapter. The wait was still worth it, too! I hope to read more soon

-GN Perone
sweets555 chapter 9 . 2/21/2008
good, as always. Though the Apprentice thing was a little random. Knowing you it will make sense soon
MistyBluePrincess chapter 3 . 1/25/2008
Ok girl- my third chapter in under an hour- this sis getting twisted. An arranged marriage? Can people really do that? LOL! Loving this fic so far- hating her ex- he needs to go back to wherever he came from. I am still so confused as to who I want her to end up with. To make it more adventurous maybe add some more descriptions of the mysterious serial killer and her drama with her uncle's will. Girl spice it up a bit! I have to take a break from reading but I will be back- still thinking it's awesome.

NR
MistyBluePrincess chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
The chapter was beautiful- I think you need to take the time and search for and replace any prepositions that maybe missing. there were a few places where words like "of" and "after" and others should have been placed. When you described the outfits they had on I wanted just a tad more detail because they do live in an environment filled with fashion. But as I've said before and will say again- this story is superb! Keep it up!

NR
MistyBluePrincess chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
It's a lovely story so far. Reminds me of Christina Skye novels- just love me some CIA or Navy Seal Officers- so lethally dangerous. I really don't know who I like for Fayth, but I love her character- so not the typical rich fashion heiress. Will be back to read more. Simply put: eloquent and superb!

NR
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 8 . 1/15/2008
I'll have to go back and re-read the seventh chapter b/c i'm comfused on a couple things. But other than my small confusion I love this chapter! I hope fayth is going to be ok. And as for Lee, I think he likes kayla so yay. This story is awsome. Keep it up!

P.S. The Month wait was worth it _

Kristie marie
InvisibleLight chapter 8 . 1/7/2008
Aggh! No! You can NOT kill Fayth! If you do, I will be mad at you. Make her better! Carter can't be with her if she's DEAD! Great chapter, update as soon as possible (:

-GN Perone
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