Reviews for Fayth Required
Sir Scott chapter 5 . 11/28/2007
Nice. It was funny that the two guys really put on the outfits. It looks like Fayth is doomed. It doesn't really seem that any of the guys are good enough for her.

I would have thought her mother would have been happy that her daughter was safe, instead of getting all righteous over Fayth's skills in using a firearm.

~SirScott
Sir Scott chapter 4 . 11/28/2007
Another cliffhanger, this time Fayth is being kidnapped. I was wondering what the real deal was between the Ashtons and the Days.

~SirScott
Sir Scott chapter 3 . 11/28/2007
An arranged marriage, that's unusual in modern times. Some people might find that horrible, but who knows? It might not be too bad. You wouldn't have to worry about dating and searching for someone.

~SirScott
Sir Scott chapter 2 . 11/28/2007
Nice chapter. I liked the dream at the end. I wonder if there's anything seriously wrong with Fayth's stomach.

~SirScott
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
Good introduction. You have a lot wonderful stories posted on here. Most people, who have this many entries, just have poems.

~SirScott
criti-sized chapter 6 . 11/21/2007
This chapter was a lot shorter than the others. I guess cade isn't as cool as he was before, blah.

Sorry about how short this is, I'm late for my last class and am ready to go home already.

C.S.
criti-sized chapter 5 . 11/21/2007
Okay, to the chapter. Cancel that comment about her mother being dead earlier. i don't know what else I was reading that mentioned a mother being dead, but I probably got the two reviews mixed up, sorry.

It makes sense that the killer would be her mother's ex- to some degree, but why would he go after her? Would be his way of getting revenge on her mother or soemthing? I'm just curious.

How did Adonis find out about Cade?

Interesting capter.

C.S.
criti-sized chapter 4 . 11/14/2007
Okay, I'm back and ready to do some more reviewing.

"It hurt and it was to the point it was making her dizzy." It would've made me more than dizzy. I woukd've probably beat the hell out of her just to make myself feel better.

"She was imagining jumping across the table and harming her ahem charming grandma." Al though this sentence is humourous and expresses the slight contempt that Fayth is feeling for her grandmother at the moment. It's slightly out of text. Maybe you could add something to express her thoughts, but not take away from the narration.

I'm just curious, but why was Carter's name in bold letters?

"“Actually it’s the rest of his life if you follow through with the mysterious heart attack thing.” Abe reminded." Lol, Abe is humourous. It's funny that he can find something light to joke about when she's stressed.

I think that the big explanation from her beeper going off isn't necessary yet. How would she know that exactly yet without being debriefed about it? You could probably have that in a later chap.

This chapter was good. I liked the descriptions in it. There were a few parts I had questions on: Like her mother's death, you said a serial killer, and why someone's after her. I'm sure there are answers for eachh of them, but I'm just expressing them to you as I go along.

C.S.
criti-sized chapter 3 . 11/12/2007
Wow, she has an outrageous family. Being signed over to some kid that would find her to be a better rump in the sheets than a wife... Thanks grandma, huh?

Then Adonis... What a cook, he doesn't need a guide, he needs a professional psychiatrist, lol.

C.S.
criti-sized chapter 2 . 11/12/2007
Another interesting chapter. It does seem that Fayth has a lot of men that are interested in her, I guess that's the benefit of this being a story. You get to put whatever you want in it, right?

C.S.
criti-sized chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
Well, here I finally am. I told you I would get to your story eventually, and I did. Not saying that it was pressure or anything, but I was just letting you know that I keep my word.

Okay, This story has an interesting beginning. It starts off weird, and not awkward, but weird for the fact she wants to kill her step-mother. I've heard of teens that don't like their step-parents, but I'm not ceratin how many have actually thought of killing them.

She should've wanted to kill her boyfrined if anything, but I know that's not how it goes.

At first I was wondering why therre was a reporter at their dinner, but I guess you explained it all. Her father's got big money and the dinner is an important event.

" She knew it was her friend and follow med student Lee Michaels that she invited so she ripped open the door." 'Follow' should be 'fellow'.

Lol, his ego should be more than deflaed, he should get the hint from those words.

"“I’ve never seen a girl work so fast.” Cade teased." Why is it always an egotistical guy that runs into a nice girl?

The rest of the chapter is good. It did seem a bit rushed, but what story isn't. Honestly. Fayth seems like she has a few things to learn about the world and guys, but what the hell, I'm sure she'll get a chance to... Seeming as that Cade is teh guy she may get with in the end.

C.S.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 6 . 11/9/2007
OMG! nice chapter. Update soon, don't worry about it being short or w/e. I loved it!

Kristie Marie
TheQuilAndInk chapter 6 . 11/8/2007
Another amazing chapter

I can't wait to find out what happens next

Please update soon
TheQuilAndInk chapter 5 . 11/8/2007
Can we say "action packed"

Haha i can't her father and abe did that haha lol

On to the next
TheQuilAndInk chapter 4 . 11/8/2007
Poor girl

Uh-oh Black clothed figures

Once again great chapter on to the next
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