Reviews for Hopeless
non.graceful chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Throughout the poem the main thing I focused on was the shale the poem created -.-

But dont get me wrong, I liked this.
Trish J chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
I just completely fell in love with your poem right here.

Brilliant.
Aelfin chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
wow.

This is so amazing you write beautifully.

i found it completely heart-wrenching ]

Aelfin

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Yokotaashi chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Very touching, I'd like to know where this inspiration came from. as far as poetry, its a bit choppy, moving from one idea to the next without much transitional material, but the presentation was wonderful
Sorelliena chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Mm, it's very sweet and mournful. But, I don't think it belongs in the Fiction section; It's more a poem.

I'll read more of your things!