|Reviews for Blank Document|
| once rained for chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Wow, very nice piece. I just feel an immense satisfaction after reading it, you know?
One thing- the way his train of thought jumped from hating history and liking dinosaurs and robots to how wonderful love is, is kinda strange. Random. From kid to Socrates in a second, you know? Maybe you should expand a it on the transession? I also think those little details about his personality in the beginning are kinda unneeded. And his name- whoah! Was that just for amusement? Basically, I htink it would be better if you made the boy a little more general, so readers can relate and also think that, somewhere out there, there could actually be a kid doing this.
'And she’d then put a tiny frowning face beside that F.' - That made me want to strangle that teacher. I love this touch though!
Keep it up!
| sweets555 chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
I would've given him an A. Silly teachers...
great job, adding to favs