I like it. :)

Oh. Is the child Tommy's? Or did she grow up, get married, have a kid, and get divorced?

Please update soon.

~Twilight Starr~

Good work so far, I enjoyed the concept.

“Livy there is no need to apologize, I could think of nothing I like better than waking up to your smiling face.”

Too bad guys really weren't that sweet, hehe )

im so glad you posted this story i love it .

Can't wait for the next update!

Interesting but you never can really expect teenage love to last, at least not in my opinion.

Great start.

Please update soon.

I like this story so far, I'm sure the little girl is Tommy's lol how could it not be or maybe you'll suprise us who knows, anyway update whenever you can

This story's actually pretty good. Your descriptions are very imaginable, but the only problem is you need more details. Like ages, are they in school?

Nice flashback scene. I think you managed to convey the depth of their relationship and how much it hurt her that he didn't tell her. But it's his kid, right? Because if it isn't... Be careful with your commas/semicolons and usage.

UPDATE SOON!

i liked the first chapter, i think it's worth a try. Actually, you better update soon becuase i love it! sure it's sort of clichè, but who doesn't love a good clichè?

update soon!

WOW,this is so good!

Is the little kid Tommy's?

Can't wait for the next chapter( which i hope you will post soon)!