Reviews for Shocked
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
very nice writing. do you write for a church?
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Pardon the language, but if I ever see him again I will kick his fuckin' ass! I never knew that he hit his sister, she's so young and sweet. Well I'm sure that finding out little sercrets like this help you get over him, I'll keep you in my prayers :)
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
wowee. i thnk thats the longest poem i've ever read all the way through without skipping parts. ) i love it.