|Reviews for Our Story|
| SerialXLain chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
I really like the last two lines and the "blood clots on the street" line...
Nice job. *insert heart here*
| Johanna chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Yours was aawsome and sad, i LOVED it!
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
This is sad, and a harsh reality. The third, fourth, and fifth "stanzas" really got to me. All I can say is great job.