damn...i really liked that. A lot.

Would you write an epilogue? Pretty please?

Aw the story was very entertaining. It was an amzing read. Quite interesting. :D

Nice story. So far so good. It's so cute how Jerik and Catherine react to each other.

Wow, this is getting good already. ;) I wanted to keep reading but I might as well be fair and review. XD Off to the next chapter I go!

love it. Great job. awesome. -

Hey. This story has got GREAT potential but at the moment its just not...well, there's just not enough of it. The plot is excellent and i love your characters. I began this story thinking the princess was going to be one of these 'new women' who's strong and independant. DOn't get me wrong, i love those types of characters but this story just screamed for a damsel in distress and you delivered. However, I do think it needs filling out in places. There are bits where you could do so much more but it just jumps a bit and you can't really get into it. Its like a long summary of a story.

I hope I haven't upset you with my negative comments but i think if you worked on extending scenes and filling them out then this story could be amazing.

Sorry if i upset you,

AmyBabe

LOVED IT!

It was totally awsome! It wasn't too rushed or too slow, and the plot rocked! so extra brownies points for that! XD

Great job and keep it up! P

~RL~

hey, nice work. conversations went fairly smooth, and good job for having a character named Ray! i like that name, haha

-vesta

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