Reviews for Born to be reborn's promise
Isca chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
"Just let me say those words I miss you

we were born to be reborn, when flowers bloom during winter

let's meet again."

WOW! The 'I Miss You' was so heartfelt and full of angst. I LOVED the born/reborn part; it was so sorrowful and beautiful at the same time. The flowers blooming was magnificent imagery. The 'Let's Meet Again,' was such a sweet sentiment and it was very loyal.

Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Sweet poem.

Twilight Starr
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
You have a unique way of writing and I LOVE IT! Keep up the great work!

Kristie Marie
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Very emotional and the imagery is pretty. Losing someone you love is hard...

Emma the Paradox chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Oh, my. This is soft, and sweet, but very cold, as well. I really love the images here, and the content is quite bittersweet.

The only thing I would have to criticize is the lack of rhythm here... I had trouble making this all flow together in my head. I'd suggest a few more line breaks, and perhaps some syllable changes.