The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NóvelStar, just submit your story to hardy nó or joye nó

A pretty realistic story here, especially compared to a lot of the others. Definitely a funny twist at the end, though.

Here's another one that I just LOVED.

And let me tell you, it's strange for me to read something like this. I'm a fanfiction writer, actually, so it's not often that I come to fictionpress... And on top of that, I don't read works in this genre either. The closest I've ever come to reading a Western is my one encounter with a book about a group of four religious women who get hitched in Kansas. Haha...

Anyways... I didn't really expect an ending like that. You really have a talent for this stuff. :D I love the names, too. "Stinky Smits" and, even better, "Honest Ned." HAH!

Welp, thanks for another great read.

Classic story telling, Mark Twain himself couldn't come up with a better con.

Translation: I liked it to say the least.