Reviews for Moonshine
Alice Faraday chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
So sad and so pretty. Very well written. I love the idea of catching the moonlight, since most people would think of catching sunlight instead. Good job, keep it up.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
This is sad. In the end the tragedy seems almost intentional, like because the girl believed herself to be so unworthy she forced the moonlight away from her. It was a good poem, and interesting thought. The title kind of threw me off because I was thinking about the other type of moonshine. Haha. Good job.
Nonya Soum chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Beautiful imagery and a great story! So bittersweet and light too. I like how you use moonlight to represent a type of filler or distraction for/from the faults. It's a beautiful object to use and makes for a better picture. Poetry portraying real life with objects and literal applications are great, but I think metaphors are fantastic. Anyway, I like it! Fantastic job!

Write on!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Interesting concept. I like it. Great job as always.