Reviews for Autopsy Queen
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
wow...you really know when to enclose words in parentheses...

this is really good...

"she was never really filled with magic"

beautiful...

truly yours...
AluminumMuse chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Huh. I really like this, it makes me think. It reminds me of a FanFiction I read once (rated M, I can send you the link on request). I am crazy about dissections. While I realize that this poem is probably not actually supposed to be taken literally, and is instead a metaphor for society poking away at some girl, or something like that, I am going to take it at surface value.

Go me.

Feather La
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
I like how you've gone unique with the rhyme scheme, as it seems natural, and sticks to the theme well. The parentheses work well as asides to concentrate the differential of flow and meaning. Very well developed. Good write. MD:77.