Its sweet.

I liked the one-shot, it was very well-written and cute :)
But how did Ian ask Ryan out without Ryan knowing it?

Awcute :) well written

I love it... This is actually the first one I read here in Fiction press. It's like really light and well written. I like the tense changing abruptly by the way, cos I do that too with my writings. I also hoped that there would be more details about the happy ending, cos it's like so delicious and I'm like I just wanted more of it! How they hugged, they kissed, or more of the romantic not necessarily adulterated stuff that's just such a sigh to read... :)

So cute! I love it!

Aww... they're are so cute together. You did a good job of writing the story.

Nice. Only confused about the 'I asked you out' part. Don't think I ever read it in the story so it makes it stunning to learn that Ian apparently asked Ryan out.

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Funny, cute, and creative. I loved it.

cute!

Very nice oneshot. I could've a little more explaining on the whol "I asked you out" thing, but other than that it was bang on.

Great story! :) I would have loved to see a kiss XD but I really liked it.

hahaha, yeah, it's a bit rough-practice will take care of that. but other than that, it was cute. especially ian. the ending seriously cracked me up. :D i think my favorite part is when ryan's like 'you are such a brat.' but yeah, keep writing!

Great! I love the details about the show, and the way they misunderstood each other. And Michael totally pulled a Solomon there. Lovely story.

I have a weakness for hate2love plots. Your oneshot is so funny and cute! I read with a grin on my face the whole time. Nice job.