Reviews for Clean Confused
allancaldera chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Its sweet.
heyitsstupidme chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
I liked the one-shot, it was very well-written and cute :)
But how did Ian ask Ryan out without Ryan knowing it?
Dinosaurs R Dead chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Awcute :) well written
Cabriolle chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I love it... This is actually the first one I read here in Fiction press. It's like really light and well written. I like the tense changing abruptly by the way, cos I do that too with my writings. I also hoped that there would be more details about the happy ending, cos it's like so delicious and I'm like I just wanted more of it! How they hugged, they kissed, or more of the romantic not necessarily adulterated stuff that's just such a sigh to read... :)
Shjsj7732 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
So cute! I love it!
SootyKiwi chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Aww... they're are so cute together. You did a good job of writing the story.
Zia chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Nice. Only confused about the 'I asked you out' part. Don't think I ever read it in the story so it makes it stunning to learn that Ian apparently asked Ryan out.
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arsinoee chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Funny, cute, and creative. I loved it.
Amopet4 chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Amethystars chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Very nice oneshot. I could've a little more explaining on the whol "I asked you out" thing, but other than that it was bang on.
ddz008 chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Great story! :) I would have loved to see a kiss XD but I really liked it.
MacKitty chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
hahaha, yeah, it's a bit rough-practice will take care of that. but other than that, it was cute. especially ian. the ending seriously cracked me up. :D i think my favorite part is when ryan's like 'you are such a brat.' but yeah, keep writing!
Amindaya chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Great! I love the details about the show, and the way they misunderstood each other. And Michael totally pulled a Solomon there. Lovely story.
Sobran chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
I have a weakness for hate2love plots. Your oneshot is so funny and cute! I read with a grin on my face the whole time. Nice job.
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