Reviews for One More For The Road
twilight chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
I like this. It shows information instead of telling it, something many writers have trouble with. However, it seems almost like a character study. I think it would be better if you expand it a bit.
Rachel chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Wow how did you think of this? It's so good. Did you make up the lyrics yourself?