i have a cat on one of my arms so i really can't write all that good... I love your story, and really want to know what is up with this scent thing! it's driving me crazy!

OMG! They kissed! AH! OMGOMGOMG! i love this and i am addicted! when will the next chapter be out? i am from Bella Penombra... edwardsgurl_2011...I LOVE THIS STORY! please update soon?

Hey, just wanted to tell you that I love your story , The vampires half moon and I cant wait for the next chapter.i have got a friend called Zane who is really into vampires, lol.

whoa! is zane mind controling her or something?

hey hey! So, yes, I just read the past few chapters and got caught up on all of the DRAMA.

It's still amazing, as you well know, and if you don't write more, I'll hunt you down. Well, I'll get a hunter to do that for me :P jk jk, but seriously though, I feel like the story is really progressing steadily, and I can't WAIT to see what happens with Zane and Ty. Because you know it's all about the hot guys.

Aw, you made Zane break his streak of coolness in this chapter! Ah well, nobody's perfect I guess. Not even a vampire.

Great chapter. Good progress; I enjoy how you give us, your readers, chapters in such a short amount of time.

Great chapter.

I like the kiss. :)

Looking forward to more.

~Twilight Starr~

WELCOME! NOW UPDATE SOON OR I WILL BE LIKE TY AND CHASE YOU AROUND WITH A STAKE!

Haha, loved the 'I'm not listening' moment. Love her mom's reasoning in the whole Zane matter. I can see a parent being like that with their kid, and I guess she's right being concerned about him. I mean, he is a vampire, as totally, completely hot as he is, and he's gotta give off some sort of strange vibe that parents automatically don't want their 17 year old daughter around.

But Alex and Ty kissed! omg! lol. :) But why was she dreaming about kissing Zane? Oh, dear...lol. Can't wait for the next update. :)

-L

very good! update soon!

Great chapter.

Looking forward to an update. :)

~Twilight Starr~

Ah, Zane. One of those cool guys you'd hate to love, but love to hate.

Another great chapter. You've got me completely hooked in!

Nice, Zane, very nice. Thanks for ruining the moment. lol. loved the chapter. Sorry I didn't review the last one, stuff has been crazy. I still love ur chapters, and u got me with that ending. He'd better have a good reason for butting in like that. Zane is awesome, but the guy really does know how to come in just at the right time. lol. Great job.

:)

-L

Great chapter.

Nice cliffhanger.

Please update soon. :)

~Twilight Starr~

omg plz update soon i love the characters... can Alex and Ty be a couple or is it forbidden?