Reviews for Pretenses
Fan Fan chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
You have some very beautiful works like this one. I am very intrigued as to why I have not spotted you before :) Thank you for your beautiful poems
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Last stanza portrays a wonderful view of sorrow. Wonderful poem, great work. Keep it up!
Toxic.Industrial.Waste chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Under pretense...what a beautiful way to begin such a sad poem. It sounds as if it could be a lulling anthem for the hopeless.

Good work.