This is so sweet!

You write really well, I really like your stories. You put an original spin on them, its great.

More!

I like the way that you have went back and rewritten chapter 10. And it had Ellie in it! I love that little girl. I thought this was a good chapter, and as always I can't wait to read the next chapter! _

~Hisa

I like the new chapter 10. I love that you added ellie to it. update soon.

are you gotta do any of this from nathan poibnt of view

Yes! High-five kindred pathetic teenage Disney lover! I have been watching them fairly non-stop myself, as well.

I'm thoroughly convinced that my prince is waiting for me.

my update for email isn't working...and i'm really annoyed at it but ANWAYS! I loved this. And i guess you could check out Under One Banner ~ Taiteilijan, its me and my friend's co-story

Good chapter. MY favortie fictionpress story is Mitchell & Chritstina. You can find it under my favs, on my profile. If you have time will you review my story please! Hope to read more soon!

~Hisa

I liked this chapter, though I know what you mean. I recently took down a chapter on one of my stories so I could rewrite it because it pretty much sucked. I did notice a few words missing here and there, but unfortunately I was too lazy to point them out. But I liked where you ended it. It was sweet. )

Uh...I dunno what my favorite story on here is. It would just be so easy to say "Mine!", but I honestly don't like them that much. (I'm a little bit of a perfectionist.) FoxyWriter's stuff is really good, though, if you're into fantasy. And Myrika is really good for romance.

I thought the chapter was good, and I really can't wait for the next one. I don't know, but I just felt that something was missing. ::shrugs:: It's probably just me.

So anyway, my all time favorite story on Fictionpress is Six Feet From Paradise by JD Allen. I thoroughly believe she is a genius. It takes place in the eighties, and is about a girl named Megan who finds out she has cancer. Since her parents are stuck in another country, she's forced to live in the town hospital for awhile which causes a problem since she's pretty much scared of them. And then she encounters Zack (I think that's how she spells it) who's been living in the hospital all his life. At first he seems like an annoying guy, but once time goes along, she realizes that he's actually alright. And then love blooms and it's just freakin awesome. I definitely recommend it since she just reposted it.

And if you have any extra time left, ::cough cough:: you could check out my story, Gifted. Just one of those high school stories about a bunch of kids' lives. It sounds better than you think, I promise lol.

this is good

this is good

hey, this chapter's great and im beginning to like ethan. haha. but... i hope nathan and erin would end up with each other! hhaha.. hm favorite stories. Brown eyes, Letter Tag and all of Dillusional's story(shes so cool!), Honourshill and many more. haha.

lovin the story! i love sucky waiter boy!

So, pretty much, I've been busy with NaNoWriMo. So yeah. That's my excuse.

Yay! SWB is back! I can't wait to see how she's going to explain that one away. And I'm glad that she's at least *trying* to get along with Nathan.

And...uh...I'm really liking Paramore right now. Especially their song "Misery Business". And I like that Staind song they keep playing on the radio, "It's Been Awhile". And the new Santana song. And I'm just going to stop now, because this is getting longer than the actual review.

Thanks for updating. I just love little kids too. _ I had another student teaching today, so that was awesome. To answer your question I love The Beatles right now. I pretty much have been listening to them all the time.

I think this chapter was good. I love how Erin is so conserned about Ellie. Oh, and the story Luke told caused me to crack up laughing. Keep up the awesome work! _

~Hisa