i was so excited when i saw the chapter title, and the end cracked me up like crazy :), in answer to your question worst song is...hmm i dont know but the best is definitely A little peice of heaven by avenged sevenfold, not on the radio though, too good/long

I like the tone of this story... that having a baby doesn't end Erin's life, and that (especially in this chapter) she can still live in a relatively normal fashion. I also like that you emphasize that Erin is taking care of Ellie... she's not pawning her kid off to her grandmother, that's such a great sign of the maturity that's necessary in being a parent. You're really hitting on big subject matters here- specificially when you talk about the "abortion" seminar. I'm curious to see where you'll go with that- it's nice to see that you're not pushing your views... too many authors try to insert their views onto a story in a really obvious manner.

I'm really interested in this story and I hope you keep on updating.

Oh, I do have one minor criticism... it sort of disrupts the flow of the story to put an A/N in the middle of a chapter. I understand that it was supposed to be two chapters, but it might just have been better to put it at the end?

Anyways, definitely digging this story... the reappearance of "SWB" sure adds something interesting. :)

Another fantastic chapter in this fantastic story.

I'm glad that Erin is beginning to feel pangs of nostalgia for her past. If I had a child and was disconnected from the party scene, I would imagine reentering it would cause a lot of those feelings to come rushing back.

Elizabeth's reaction to the Nathan-Erin situation got me curious, but I'm sure in the future I will find out the reason for this ebullition.

I thought Erin's call to her Grandma was very endearing and cute, and that the anecdote Luke told in the car was sincerely funny.

I think though Nathan still wants Erin, she will be polite and responsible when it comes to turning him down, especially because she knows him so well- possibly better than anyone else.

"But things were different now. That, we both knew. We could barely hold eye contact anymore, without him getting embarrassed, or me becoming annoyed. But we were on our way to changing that, I hoped. For you, Ellie, I thought as I listened to her heavy breathing beside me."

This clearly shows that they are becoming mature adults, and that they don't act like kindegarteners is important for their child, because it is not just Erin's daughter.

And, being an outed SWB-fangirl, I could not help but smile when he plopped back into her life. Can I smell a little romance along with that faint whiff of fries?

To answer your question, I'm obsessed with Jack's Mannequin right now, a little more than usual. I listen to the song, "I'm Ready," about a billion times a day.

HE'S BACK! He's back, he's back, he's back!

Yay! Keep writingg.

I'm in love with the bands Dot Dot Dot and The Medic Droid right now; they're just amazing in my opinion.

This story is really good too.

Can't wait for next chapter.

this is awesome! i want SWB back too :)

AW!

dun dun dun! nice :) will read m ore tomorrow

YAY! new chapter. Sorry I've been busy lately and sick so blah. Dude eight chapters is ALRIGHT. It wasnt too fast paced and it still had all that realistic melodrama. Completely enjoyable love.

DUH.

Nathan - HE WAS HALF SMILING at her after saying she wanted to work with him. Aww.. that jerkish wimp. Ahah, just kidding. They had a moment xD

Okay, hm, my highlight. There hasnt been one that really set their selves apart from the other scenes. Not because they were crap. They were awesome, so its hard to choose.

Whose your favorite character so far, and why?

Mine would be Kelsey. She reminds me how sarcastic and manipulative (in a good way, ie getting out of detentions or missing class) as me. Wish she was my friend. :D

Anyway, update soon!

Isabella.x

I do like this story a lot. I think it's going to get really interesting pretty soon. I'm not really sure how I feel about Nathan, but I think I like the other guy better.

Let's see the highlight of last week was when I went over to the middle school in my district and helped teach class. I can't wait till the next chapter! _

~Hisa

*snicker* That's usually the way it works, the school slut calling other girls sluts to take the heat off of her. Man, I really don't miss high school.

Well, except marching band. But I've decided that doesn't count.

Anyway, I just got back from seeing Across the Universe. Which was a really, really weird movie, but it was also really good, and I recommend it. That's the highlight of my week, I decided.

I hope you update soon!

-squeals- IM LOVING THIS FREAKING STORY!

great! i cant wait for the next chapters, and i'm surprised that she's actually gonna work with Nathan. wow

but the highlight of my week? the homecoming dance. it was SO much fun, even though i ripped a hole in my dress! hahahah.