Reviews for Smile
Daiysis chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
how wonderful! sounds like me... gosh i really have to stop saying that... everything you write sounds like me! i'm a very undecisive and hopeful person with luck on her side )

Anyways, i love how the person was in denial of what was really going around her, story of all our lives at one point really. It's really easy to relate to, great work!
ilovebooksandmusic chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Aww cute poem. I liked how it was hopeful, yet uncertain at the end. Good job.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Aw! That was so cute! I love reading uplifting poems, especially from you. Haha. The ending was perfect too. Did that really happen? Well, even if not, it was a sweet poem. It made me smile. :]
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Cute and kind of innocent. But not sappy or trite in the way love/romance poems sometimes are. Nice work.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
I liked how it seemed hopeful at the end, but uncertain at the same time.