I'm not a fan of contrived drama like this. Things could be resolved much more easily if the people involved would just fucking talk to each other.

wowww!

i am relentless in my search for stories as good as yours, I swear that the first few chapters had me reluctant in continuing the story.
But as got into it I couldn't stop, I say this in shock because, I'm not one to go completely ballistic when there is no wifi,-honestly I just go with the flow, get my DS or get a book- but it has come to my attention that I desperately wanted to know what would happen next in the story.
It was at least page 27 or so,at the time. So if you have a inkling of an idea for the sequel, please, PERSUE IT! I'm dying to know what happens later on.

Finally, the ending. What can I say... this story has its high moments and downside. This is sort of an interracial romance; honestly, I was looking for scenes where the race difference would be a bigger role for Alex and Dani's relationship. It was the main reason why I read but until the end, i didn't see what I was expecting. Aside from that the resolutions that should take place didn't happened - like Alex' relationship with her parents (it was lacking in explanation and I think that should have been explored than make alex leave the house and then nothing), second, Michelle Davis and friends (she has the making of a potentially effective character here actually who didn't fully achieve the role, I thought after Dani's amnesia episode, there will be more drama. Unfortunately, nothing again.)

However despite all that complaints from me, you still DID IT. Some chapters stirred strong emotional response from me. And that's what I'm always looking for a written story. The connection to the characters through the emotions they bring into existence. For me that's important more so than the grammar and technical errors (that could be easily corrected) but full readers connection (that takes time).

So there's room for improvement. If you get back, then i hope to read your work more.

This is cruel to the eyes. Heartless. Why thou maketh Alex suffer that much?

Damn it, why do we always wrote about heroes/heroines who are so freaking self righteous and self-sacrificing? It gets tiring that i wanna smack the main character together with the dumbass antagonist.

You know what if you're apologizing for putting violence you should have make a scene where Alex take a knife and cut this bastard Sebastian balls off.

One girl and you take 8 guys with you... dimwit asshole. I hope I'll read in the next chapters that this guy would be put to his proper place. What a chauvinistic pig.

*put in here the squealing onion emoticon*

I can see/feel the hearts floating in the air. )

You should definitley write more of these two.
Great great great great story.
well done.

Oh god...im with tears on my face...again...

Wow...i actually cried with alex... .I usually dont review this more but i cant help it...its a so damn good story.

These chapters are freaking awesome...lovely...sweet...oh god.
great job

Awwww...this chapter was really sweeter... .

This chapter was so sweet... .

you're evil! i did like the story, but the things you put alex through... just plain evil! i hope you wrote/write a happier sequel.