|Reviews for Even If|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
if not yours then mine... than
this piece just makes me say aw... So many of us can relate to this piece.. and its nicely done... I really like the phrase "sugarcoating lines" and the idea of living in an uneeded manner... great job
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Powerful detail, you really used your heart to write these verses. Keep up the good work.
| whispered something profound chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
So sad... I love the first two lines, they start the poem off really strong and you keep it pretty strong the entire way through.