Reviews for Stars
IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
It's so beautiful! I really like your poetry, it's all really well done. I don't know how you think up of these things. I can never right poetry, not like that.

Oh, the only typo I saw was when you said wait, there really are starts. It should've been stars, right? Yeah. But it doesn't really take anything away from the whole poem for me, because I make a million errors on every page like repeating a sentene that I was really excited about writing over and over without meaning to. Crazy.

I love it. Really. I can't really describe why, because I can't claim to understand it. But I love it.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
I liked the ending. Same as PQ on the typos. But it's not deathly important or anything. I liked the subject, good job. It felt really...real.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
The theme of stars is beautiful. And the ending is touching.

You might want to recheck this for typos. Not to be obnoxious or anything.