Reviews for I Try So Hard
Silentfire12 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
When I first started to read this poem i started to tear up because it described me in ever way.
I buried many memories so far deep I now cant remember what happened to all my memories 5 years ago.
lailaaa chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
it's a REALLY good poem, so thumbs up to you

just some constructive critisism:

- some of the lines sound like you kind of wrote them on the spot, as in, they are just there to rhyme.

That makes the poem sound a but childish, but i think it was only one line :S

Please don't take offence to anything i've said!

i was just trying to help you :)

keep up the AWESOME work
The Guiltless Person chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
I like the poem alot! Its well written. Keep up the good work!