This was so perfect

wow.

one word.

WOW.

...okay...more words...

lol

i really like how this piece is presented. it sounds the way i'm sure to made it sound-bold, to the point, yet going into small details at the same time. i like this! i don't really have any criticism. there's only one part "What does the mean in your comprehension?". the-that. but i think you got that. but nice work. keep writing!

-vesta

[ps. would you mind r&ring Outta my daze for me?]