Reviews for broken
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
The second and last lines are so powerful.

Amazing :)
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
rawr you have good writers block haha

whenever i try to write with writers block it comes out as a 5th graders sad excuse for a poem...

haha well good job and keep writing!

painting andromeda chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Interesting last line, intriguing.

Stay well,

4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Long time no read, huh? But, belive it or not I am still alive, just a bit too happy to write my normal sad stuff at the time being. However, the muse did visit me last night, and she graced me with two new poems and a new rant.

Now, On to what I got on to do. Very nicely done. I'm not a fan of short poetry, but this is very nice. It conveys alot in just the little space it takes up. Very well done. Another yay for you.

polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
i absolutely LOVE the first line.

& i don't know what it is, but i also love the use of the word 'wilt' in the third line.

you've captured it perfectly.