|Reviews for broken|
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
The second and last lines are so powerful.
| XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
rawr you have good writers block haha
whenever i try to write with writers block it comes out as a 5th graders sad excuse for a poem...
haha well good job and keep writing!
| painting andromeda chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Interesting last line, intriguing.
| 4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Long time no read, huh? But, belive it or not I am still alive, just a bit too happy to write my normal sad stuff at the time being. However, the muse did visit me last night, and she graced me with two new poems and a new rant.
Now, On to what I got on to do. Very nicely done. I'm not a fan of short poetry, but this is very nice. It conveys alot in just the little space it takes up. Very well done. Another yay for you.
| polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
i absolutely LOVE the first line.
& i don't know what it is, but i also love the use of the word 'wilt' in the third line.
you've captured it perfectly.