Reviews for Raindrops |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You should have kept going in the begining. It always makes a story better when the writer explains more about the relationship. I read on another story that your this character that I love alot. But it hasnt updated so Im wandering around sotries. [I just wanted to know who you were and how you write. Im not that great of a writer so I dont try. If this is based on you and someone esle then maybe you should work on that lieing thing. Im not trying to judge you. You should always be open with people ecspecially the ones you care about. But what do I know? you should always visit people in the hospital. Im sorry if I seem to be preaching to you. Im just a lone reviewer obssesed with shoujoai. I hope you can tell whoever how you really feel. What if they leave and you never get the chance to tell them the truth? Back to the story I think the ending was cute and it was the first good onshot that was a normal pair. Or is it a norlam pair? You never said. Maybe Im just making myself believe its two girls. Im in a relationship with another girl but shes embarrassed about what people think so I mighyt not stay with her. I dont really know. What do you thikn? We may barley know eachother but I'm asking everyone I meet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great, but have you ever considered trying something new? This story has that sense that makes you want to keep reading, maybe from the simple language. Keep this up, maybe write a story a little longer, and it'll be great! |