This is a really great poem! I love the end! The entire thing is so true.

I know how you feel...even in person you can't always know.

It feels kind of ironic that I have found this poem that describes my life right now. Is he lying or is he not? Should I tell him that I will go out with him or not? I feel equally compelled to and to not. Odd that I found this perfect poem. Fate, you could say.

This was beautiful, it described an almost childlike sense of need for attention, whether genuine or not. It was a little long, but I'm sure you meant for it to be that way.

I especially like the lines

"You came alive like a marionette online,

Springing into action,

Desperate for attention."

Those lines really added an almost chilling feeling of loving someone that doesn't love you back, almost wanting to bend you into what they want you to be. Yet you follow. I liked that aspect.

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