Reviews for All We Can Do Is Hope
Fox May chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Again, the reason I did not watch the news anymore, too depressing.

But you are right there is still hope.

I can see this poem happening in real life, like real events caught on film.

The format is great and the word choice stunning.

I should remember poem when I have my class of my students.

Great job.
lymli chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
wow, I like the first part about the man saving a stranger

why did the stranger rob his body? it's a curious story I'd like to know. the whole poem makes me think how ironic is life.
Wolf's Night chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Nice portrayal of the real world. Its sad that hope sometimes isn't enough though :(
Ashley-chan chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
That was...beautiful. I loved it. Just...words cant pin how I felt. It just kinda spoke to me.
TragicDreams chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
This is very sad. I like it though. This kind of stuff really does happen in the world which makes it even sadder. Keep writing!
Goodnight Nickname chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
This is amazing. Instead of portraying the world as a lovely "butterflies and unicorns" place to live, you showed how much of a dog eat dog place we really live in. You demonstrated the truth about the truth and the horror of human nature. Well done. Adding to favorites.
criti-sized chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Well, the poem was very nice. There were a few phrases in it that I felt didn't exactly gel with the pace of the poem. I couldn't gather the tone it was setting off in order to read it. But the wording was very powerful and the meaning of it resonates easily.

C.S.