Reviews for birdbones |
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![]() ![]() ![]() birdbones. what an interesting concept. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this whole thing was just gorgeous. The first stanza was beautifully crafted, as were the other stanzas. My favorite is the last line. It's so powerful in its simplicity. Overall, great job. I enjoyed reading this. I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really loved this - everything about it. You had me from the first line (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() there's something stark and beautiful about this I just can't quite put my finger on. but the line "we are poised, you and i, on the verge of something beyond us" made me shiver and the ending made me sigh, so it's safe to say I love it. |