Reviews for A New Maid And A Beautiful Bachelor Dont Mix!
sweetpea265 chapter 27 . 5/3/2011
Hope you can update soon :)
sweetpea265 chapter 22 . 5/3/2011
Wow. Such a witch! Anyways, just wanted to say it's still a good story. This chapter didn't have too many errors in it. So, you are getting better. You didn't finish a sentence though: "A Glaring Devon wanting nothing more than to see", see what? Now, on with the story!
sweetpea265 chapter 11 . 5/3/2011
I like the actual story. The grammar and spelling mistakes are getting a little old and sometimes confusing though. There are quite a few places throughout where you use the wrong word (eg. passed instead of past, collage/college). I can understand how it's possible to miss these though. Using spellcheck doesn't check for this type of error.
leolabrit chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
loved this story. keep writing!
lostlette chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
love it
lostlette chapter 27 . 9/18/2010
pille-ip chapter 26 . 7/11/2010
This is getting more and more interesting & intriguing... Really good stuff..
skie chapter 26 . 4/6/2010
I love the story. Can't wait for chapter 27
HappilyEverAfter123 chapter 26 . 3/26/2010
one word 4 your story... FAN-FREAKIN-TASTIC
Dance Your Heart Out chapter 25 . 3/13/2010
Write another chapter soon ? :)
Dead Deactivated chapter 24 . 3/5/2010
Who is she going to end up with? Devin or Dagan? Creative name btw, never heard Dagan before :)
KissUnderTheStars chapter 11 . 2/9/2010
lovin it so farr

Sunshine 101 chapter 23 . 2/9/2010
THis story is mesmerizing! I love it, please continue and update when you can asap!
Teeiinneell chapter 23 . 2/8/2010

It would be awsome if dagan got all protective and stuff...

CANT WAIT for the next chapter :):)
HANNAH chapter 10 . 2/8/2010
you are spelling made wrong. how you have it it is like they have it made. maid is the spelling you want
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