| Reviews for A New Maid And A Beautiful Bachelor Dont Mix! |
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   sweetpea265 chapter 27 . 5/3/2011 Hope you can update soon :) |
| sweetpea265 chapter 22 . 5/3/2011 Wow. Such a witch! Anyways, just wanted to say it's still a good story. This chapter didn't have too many errors in it. So, you are getting better. You didn't finish a sentence though: "A Glaring Devon wanting nothing more than to see", see what? Now, on with the story! |
| sweetpea265 chapter 11 . 5/3/2011 I like the actual story. The grammar and spelling mistakes are getting a little old and sometimes confusing though. There are quite a few places throughout where you use the wrong word (eg. passed instead of past, collage/college). I can understand how it's possible to miss these though. Using spellcheck doesn't check for this type of error. |
| leolabrit chapter 1 . 11/11/2010 loved this story. keep writing! |
| lostlette chapter 1 . 9/20/2010 love it |
| lostlette chapter 27 . 9/18/2010 awe |
| pille-ip chapter 26 . 7/11/2010 This is getting more and more interesting & intriguing... Really good stuff.. |
| skie chapter 26 . 4/6/2010 I love the story. Can't wait for chapter 27 |
| HappilyEverAfter123 chapter 26 . 3/26/2010 one word 4 your story... FAN-FREAKIN-TASTIC |
| Dance Your Heart Out chapter 25 . 3/13/2010 Write another chapter soon ? :) |
| Dead Deactivated chapter 24 . 3/5/2010 Who is she going to end up with? Devin or Dagan? Creative name btw, never heard Dagan before :) |
| KissUnderTheStars chapter 11 . 2/9/2010 lovin it so farr x |
| Sunshine 101 chapter 23 . 2/9/2010 THis story is mesmerizing! I love it, please continue and update when you can asap! |
| Teeiinneell chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 OOH! It would be awsome if dagan got all protective and stuff... CANT WAIT for the next chapter :):) |
| HANNAH chapter 10 . 2/8/2010 you are spelling made wrong. how you have it it is like they have it made. maid is the spelling you want |