Reviews for Crushed Hearts |
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![]() ![]() brandon is such an asshole. I was expecting more from him but it just fell short i guess. Such a douchebag, she was a bit too easy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwwwwwww |
![]() ![]() Great series! The two make a cute couple. I'm glad you didn't make Melissa say that she liked Brandon all this time and I'm glad that you didn't make Brandon say that he liked her all this time too . . because that would just be unrealistic. A few things though. I didn't think that Melissa was the best protagonist. In the beginning i felt that she only felt lust for Brandon, since she still likes him even though he's such a jerk to her. At least you didn't say she was in love with him! I also found her excessive self-pity before and during the homecoming really annoying. It was just too much for me. I'm glad that they got a happy ending though. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() one of the best stories I've read in a long time. keep writing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's so cute:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and sweet, love it! |
![]() ![]() Love this chapter. I just can't wait to know what will happen next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i swear i always reread this work of art:D great job please continue writing _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story. I'm just glad there was a happy ending, otherwise you would have had a very upset reader on your hands. Wonderful story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT A JERK! geez i alomst cried at that part |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw this chapter is really cute :]] |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute story. I fell the ending was quite short but still very awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! AWESOME STORY! I really liked it! I usually review all the chapters but I really needed to read this so I had to go ahead! I'm glad everything worked out in the end! - RoseBriar (P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar when the book is AWESOME!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a really great story. Damn I hate that Kate. Just the thought of her makes me want to slap her senseless no offence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a good ending. |