Reviews for Collars and Leashes
Nancy Mae chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
So what if it wasn't the best? I liked it, and trust me, my oppinion matters haha. Just kidding. I thought it was good, and honest. I wish I could write poems like that. I did once, but it was completely out of anger and hatred I guess. Anyway, great job.

~KML92
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
love sure is tricky isnt it...sigh...

she is so ...arg... selfish! Holding down one man while talking love to another. *fuming*

Nice poem. _
Crymson Tears chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
*gasp* I just realized...

Oh. *I'm an idiot.*

good poem though...
Sexy Vampirechick chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Hey that's 's totaly ignorance,how can she do that?Tie someone down while she loves another.

Yet this can be seen throughout the selfish of us humans,eh? Nicely described!
criti-sized chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Well, the poem definitely has a nice flow to it, that give us readers an idea of how to go about reading it.

I like the wording of your poem that you used, being that the wording is the most important thing. But I found the last line awkward. It felt like it was kind of forced there.

Otherwise that I enjoyed it a lot.

C.S.
sweets555 chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
ohh! i HATE when people do that!

its so true, the writing didnt even register. its not that bad tho, ur just being to analytical of ur own stuff. its ok, happens to the best of us