Reviews for Honor's True
Darlene Johnson chapter 21 . 1/22/2017
Holy cow. That was awesome. I need more.
Guest chapter 21 . 10/9/2014
Really great reading. A lot of characters that could have been left for a background in the second book. Shane is strong and needs to find out who she is not who others have planned for her to be. Kimberly needs to grow up and Alex needs his butt kicked. Keetan is just as
steph chapter 21 . 3/16/2014
love this story! i'm surprised by how much i liked it because usually crime isn't my thing but this was awsome, can't wait untill redemption is complete
becky.thompson.79230 chapter 21 . 9/7/2013
OMG! This story is awesome. Is there a book before this one? and have you written the next book? You can't leave me here I have to know what happens. Your writings are so interesting. I love everything you write and can't stop til I finish once I start reading. It is just torture waiting for the next book.
DOMOxKUN chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
He read the sequel on your livejournal and didn't realize it. I had become addicted to Shane and began looking through comments and people kept asking about "Honor's True" and I had no
Idea what that was so I started searching. Yup, so here I am. Let me just say that the sequel makes much more sense to me haha but I was starting to piece things together even without honors true.
daydee chapter 20 . 8/26/2011
I just reread it. I can't review the last chapter cuz I've already done it, but I just saw your author's note, and if you want, I'm up for editing it.
shhsilence chapter 21 . 2/6/2010
Oh my freaking god, you can't just leave it like that! Talk about emotional

I love it!

PLEASE do the sequel soon _
Cherrie-san chapter 21 . 6/29/2009

That was brilliant! The plot, the characters. It was all so intricate and amazing! I loved it! Have you continued this story?

Didn't see many errors, just one or two scattered about. Though I will admit, I did get confused at first. I thought I missed the first part of the story, but once I read past that it sucked me in. Great story!
Benzene chapter 21 . 5/4/2009
WOW! Amazing plot and character development. I'm surprised that there aren't more reviews for this story. It's definitely book worthy. Don't remember seeing any grammatical errors. I also like the expected twists and the maturity in this tale. Sometimes authors on Fictionpress are just too young. This definitely is not cliche or immature. Good work.
Pioneer87 chapter 21 . 4/30/2009


*re-reads last chapter in awe*

*adds story/you to favorites list*
daydee chapter 21 . 2/20/2009
I love this story. you should definitely publish. you have no idea how much i cried when court died, and it's hard to make me cry. you should be proud of yourself. i wouldn't change anything about it.
il capitano chapter 21 . 10/14/2008
that was a good story

the plot was interesting but i think there were a lot of loose ends- like wat happens with ryan-didnt he love her? so mayb u should embellish onto wat happens with him

also i think that mayb u should make her wanting out of everything more gradual and yes you do drop hints but u should make her consider dropping out of everything,including the sanctucci stuff, more seriously and embellish on it

and the flashbacks mayb u should spread them more evenly out coz usually theres a whole chunk of them together

otherwise its an uber-awsome story, its really cool and when u hav the time to edit it u should coz wen its polished i bet it'll turn out really really good. lookin forward to the sequel
a.mooch chapter 7 . 3/24/2008
I'm a little confused at to why Keetan burned down the building.
a.mooch chapter 6 . 3/24/2008
I like Keetan quite a bit less at this point... :(
a.mooch chapter 5 . 3/24/2008
I actually kind of like Cari. She's spiffy-ish. Not spiffy yet, but getting close.

And I REALLY like Keeton. He's fricking awesome! Totally spiffy.
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