|Reviews for Remorse|
| Tikklz chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
This is super. SuperB!
I love that when it goes: "yellow turned to orange,/ orange turned to red and/"
you changed it up a bit. Instead of using "turned" you used "went." Lovely touch. Same when you did "dirt turned into fire/ fire turned to space and/ space looked me in the face,/ remorseless." Awesome awesome awesomeness. You're on my fav. authors now!
| Queen of Dragonnor chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
I like the imagery in this poem.