Aw, New Yorkers aren't that bad. ;] I'm a New York City girl myself.

It is a nice story; have you ever considered sending the script to CWTV? It's very similar to Gossip Girl and One Tree Hill.

Wow! That was a very intense and emotional chapter. I think Seth helping Pierce may help Seth overcoming his problem. They both can finally relate to each other, whether Pierce knows it or not, but at one point or another, you have to let people help you. It's great and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Well, Ryan is finally settling down, which is a very good thing, and then there's Kyle who's finally having a social life, but poor Alicia. I can definitely see why she would be a bit upset, I mean she was just like him and then Kathy came and changed him, so she feels a little betrayed. Then there's Tam who has a horrible boyfriend, he honestly is no good. If only she had someone to talk to, like Pierce. Maybe they could help each other out of their funk.

Well, love the story and glad that you continued.

The sexual tension inside him had built so much over the last couple of weeks he was forced to do something he had never had to do before.

Whoa. I imagined he was gonna jack off or something. xD

And YEYKYLE'.

And Alicia's getting stalker-scary now. _;

Good job, good chapter~

DARREN.

YOU MANSLUT.

And damn, I feel REALLY REALLY sorry for the Pie[rce]-ster. D:

And Bianca should've just like.

Whacked Darren with her hair.

XD.

kate

you know who i am dammit!

i went to your fb for your new fone #

and i see

you've switched from to

-_-

ok just to let you know

i didnt read your first chapter yet

im just reviewing and talking to you here.

rofl.

(i dont think you should post up so much stuff about you...just in case of phedos...yah know? take caution)

i think this half mroe than 100 chapters story i will finish maybe by the end of this year...

x_x

its gunna take me a while.

sorry kid.

rofl.

It seems like Alicia is jealous, but she's a bit weird with those drawings. Then Ryan-I think he likes Veronica, but I could be wrong.

Lance is such an ass, and I hope the critics butcher the movie when it comes out. Pierce really deserved that job, but when people play dirty, the good guys miss out.

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Lance SERIOUSLY has to go DIAF (Die In A Fire). _ Even though he does make a point by "don't play nice." And Pierce should've just went OMNOMNOMNOM on him right then.

MOAR~~!

July has to gtfo. _ I'm sorry. If she really love Darren that much-okay, actually, I won't say it. She'd probably do it.

AND LOL, KYLE DRUNK AFTER HALF A LIIT! AHAHHAHAHAAHAAHA! And Kathy kicking Ryan in the balls. I WANNA SEE THAT.

Good job~

Is July bipolar or something? I mean she went from this complete sweetheart to a complete bitch. It's really driving me crazy.

I thought it was funny that Kyle was so drunk. He's a completely different person when he is, and I think that Kathy is great for him. Like they complete each other.

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She's finally cracking the hard layer around Kyle. I'm glad that he's finally having fun. I wonder if he's going to loose all three of his virginities.

Then there's Ryan! I'm starting to like him more that Victoria is influencing him. He's nicer and he's less of a jerk. Plus, I think that they'd look good together, you know-complete opposites.

I'm also really happy for Seth! He finally got a job and that means a lot. It should mean something to Pierce, who is the one who needs to get his act together. I think his friends need to give him an intervention.

Anyways,

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Finally, a guy writer! lol, anyway, your a great writter. I love this story so far, and I'm only on the first chapter! lol :) Great job :])

LOL. "Just a long island iced tea." WOW.

And w00t for Seth-he got a job as a bartender! WOWOWOOWOWOWO! HE. GOT. A JOB. YAH~!

And then Pierce. NO DRINKING TO THE EXCESS. RAWR. D: He has to fix himself up soon.

Good words, good writing, good job.

MOAR, NAO! :D

It's not easy for Seth and I understand that completely but he really does need to get his life together. Then Pierce needs to stop drinking because he's not the same person he used to be. He needs to get it together as well.

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