Reviews for Forever
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
This so reminds me of a story that I'm working on, I really love this because I can relate to it, it's feeling. Another excellent piece my dear )
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
i love the lines "So often forever comes to fast

And never turns into eternity" This poem sounds very inpspired and I'm glad you have this.
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
very good. like how your writing isn't gory and bloody. good work